Despite what you may think, the ‘diet’ in diet
soda does not mean it is better for you. I personally know a
nutritionist/personal trainer who tells her clients, “I would rather have you
drink regular soda than diet soda.” Not that regular soda is good for you, but
diet soda is just worse. It won’t help you lose weight, and it won’t help you
become healthy. For my opinion
editorial, I will be writing about diet soda and its harmful effects on the
human body. Diet soda is not good for you. There are multiple ingredients that
make it harmful, and in this editorial I will be focusing on aspartame, a fake
sugar in diet soda, and caffeine. I want BYU students to think twice the next
time they want a diet soda.
The big question my topic will be addressing is “What
is good?” or more specifically, “What is not
good?” My claim is telling people what they should not drink and why it is not
good for them. I want BYU students
to be informed, so they do not regret anything later in life. However, while my main focus will be on ‘what
is good?’ I will also go over “what exists?” and “what should we do?” For “what
exists?” I will write about the chemicals and ingredients in diet soda that
make it bad to drink. And for the “What should we do?” I have three words: don’t
drink it!
I plan on convincing with BYU students that my
argument is right because I am a student just like them, and I know some of the
reasons one might drink diet soda. For some, they say it is cheap. (Although,
may I just say, not as cheap as water!) Some use it to stay awake in that 8
a.m. class or at night finishing up last-minute homework. With the country
focused and being fit and healthy, some students may drink it to lose weight or
be “healthier”. Whatever the reason
is, in the long run, it is just not worth it to drink diet soda.
I want to be able to use logic and pathos to persuade
students to not drink diet soda. One of the ways my argument will be persuasive
is if I use studies and articles backing up my claim. I do not claim to be an
expert in this subject, so if I have studies and articles to back up my claim,
it will help me sound authoritative and believable.
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